Admin…….why do you bother to write grammatically poor and nonsensical drivel about these girls? Perhaps you are practising your English? The descriptive prose you wrote about this girl is poor on a number of levels.
Firstly, it’s a very long sentence. My opening sentence is somewhat lengthy at fourteen words. Your sentence is thirty-four words long! That’s a ridiculous amount of words.
Secondly, how can she take her clothes off “gradually”? You are not present to assess the relative speed. She cannot take her clothes off simultaneously. Different garments will need to be removed in differing directions.
Lastly, what “sexy promise” did she make? Do you mean her “sexual potential”? Do you mean she is “promising” in a sexual connotation? I don’t think anyone needs more than the girls’ names. Perhaps the location is necessary too. Unfortunately, reading your poor attempt at impressing us, just makes anyone with a brain laugh!
You do a great job of trawling the pornographic websites and collating their work. Keep it up, but cut the meaningless titular prose. It’ll save your time and everyone else’s time too.
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Admin…….why do you bother to write grammatically poor and nonsensical drivel about these girls? Perhaps you are practising your English? The descriptive prose you wrote about this girl is poor on a number of levels.
Firstly, it’s a very long sentence. My opening sentence is somewhat lengthy at fourteen words. Your sentence is thirty-four words long! That’s a ridiculous amount of words.
Secondly, how can she take her clothes off “gradually”? You are not present to assess the relative speed. She cannot take her clothes off simultaneously. Different garments will need to be removed in differing directions.
Lastly, what “sexy promise” did she make? Do you mean her “sexual potential”? Do you mean she is “promising” in a sexual connotation? I don’t think anyone needs more than the girls’ names. Perhaps the location is necessary too. Unfortunately, reading your poor attempt at impressing us, just makes anyone with a brain laugh!
You do a great job of trawling the pornographic websites and collating their work. Keep it up, but cut the meaningless titular prose. It’ll save your time and everyone else’s time too.